okee then....
Creepy yes...it started ok, with the eerie sounding thing in the back and it was senspenseful once he got the dog...but then the story died way too soon..... it just died.... sorry
Reviews for "The Demon Doll"
It's missing something
I think you should have made the movie a bit longer, showing the character playing with the puppy so that the viewer develops a sense of emotional attachment to it. You should also show the death scene with the puppy and the doll instead of just a flash of red when you say dead. Other than that, it's pretty good for an amateur flash film.
Very good!
I liked the style you used for this movie. Very well done. The only thing that could have been improved was the voice. It was too low, and even with the volume all the way up, I couldn't hardly hear it. But the tone of the voice was very good. The one last thing I would have liked for the movie was better length. This was kind of short. But since this was a 2006 animation, I guess it's too late to start with something new on this.
sfox8 responds:
Thanks. Yeah, it's pretty old and other than the current movie I'm working on, there isn't much else to upload, but I understand all your points and definitely agree.
The volume of the voice was due to time restraints, so I wasn't able to balance it much as I was focusing more on the animation side of it.
As for length, yeah I understand that too. Like I said, it was actually a collaborative effort and so we all tried not to make our part too long since they were all going to be put together in the end.
Thanks for the helpful review! I really appreciate it.