Good Work
Pretty Nice For PhotoShoping And Scanning
Reviews for "Two Fish"
hmm
your animation skills are good. but you lacked a decent story. nevertheless brilliant for a first try. but where u sed better than stick people. it wasnt u shud giv them a try they can really imporve your skills in flash and stick movies get a huge amount of publicity on ng
thewizardess responds:
Thanks, I admit the story wasn't the best and even under the time restrictions I could have done something more interesting. Thanks for the feedback :)
Well...
I can't really say it's top flash material, but I can say you tried your best. And even so it is your first try.
4/10
8/10.
thewizardess responds:
Thank you for being kind :) I had actually done one other thing in flash before featuring fish last year but it was garbage and I put that on deviantart rather than newgrounds. I was surprised to hear such nice feedback for my first entry here :)
i think it's fun
not like "THE BEST THING EVER!", but it has acertain charm to it.
It was 20 seconds well spent.. I feel better now.. reminds me that there is someone out there who cares...
thewizardess responds:
Thanks! I wish I had more time to spend with flash and really learn about it, I feel I have more to offer if I am given the chance. Hopefully I can provide something much nicer when I get the opportunity in college :)
If fish swam in an ocean of sugar
This was a sweet all be it short story. As i mentioned in a review for 'These She Is! Step 3' there is a niche for softer, lighthearted flashes on Newgrounds. This forefilled that gap nicely.
While your drawing had a slight roughness to it, still managed to create two endearing fish characters. Some extra frames would have seen the action go just a fraction smoother. The music piece you chose to back this story was lovely, and kept in full theme with relationship of the fish.
For a first entry thats not a bad effort at all Alyssa. I hope you have gained some passion for flash and that we see some more delicate pieces from you soon.
thewizardess responds:
Thank you for the nice review. Hopefully in college when I have my own copy of flash I can learn more and produce something of much higher quality :)