Good animation style. :3
I liked this animation, even if your style looks a lot like the one of Adam Philips. Still really good, good graphics, smooth animation and funny music.
I also liked the story line and how you made it, good job with that. Also some good effects. Maybe make a second one but make everything look perfect. :3
So for short, great job, keep it up! :D
Bertn
ok but
this is preety good but i still wont read a book
I wrote it and I dont like reading books =P
pretty good
but the mails arent a good idea. It seemed that the trailer was focusing too much on some uninteresting info. Make sure that a trailer gives the sense of the book (or the sense you want the book to give)
the whole point of the story is it gives off a simplistic concept but grows more deeper and rich as you read on, the basic concept is what i was showing and the action is showing more added parts and it makes you wonder why these parts are happening or whats happening as like a trailer should do to catch your attention to read the book.
umm...
the watterdrops were cool and th music too but graphics could be better
"Come see this awesome flash"
.........................not too excited for this, but if you're a good enough writer to get something published maybe it's worth looking out for.