Pretty well written
The problem isn't that you don't have an ok voice, it's that in choosing Lemon Demon to parody, you didn't stick within the singing style.
What I mean is that if you want to follow his background music, the lyrics have to be sung with a certain kind of pitch and meter. Try to find people to sing for you on the forums here, it's a nice enough community with a lot of people who like to take a part in things.
Either way, I'm impressed. This was really creative.
singing
was that ur singing im not saying ur singing is bad it ok i like ur usage of sprites usage of music so 10 out of 10 and 5 out of 5 good luck on ur future submissions and please make more sprite movies
Yes, that was really me singing.
lazydaisy
That was awesome. I liked it very much and the fact that I love and have the game made it that much better. The lyrics were great and the animation was too. I don't mind the singing at all it just goes with it like a narration. Try another song, but with a different game.
i also agree with frogmoe68.
it would have been better with the band who sung the ultimate showdown ! despite that the lyrics were very creative. nice job!
nice work )