Reviews for Battles; DBZ part 1

[Malficious]

You have potential

Work on making those animations more fluid and spend a little more time getting rid of any unwanted noise around the sprites. I havent Animated in flash in a long time but i animate in 3D studio max and i know that 30 frames is a second. Try to keep that in mind as you animate so that your animations are not waaay too fast or waaay too slow. THe music was a good choice, however like the previous poster said was a little too short and looped awkwardly. With that said, I say keep working on this stuff, Pretty good for a first attempt. Definitely keep working on your technique and just the little details. Keep those animations smooth and you can make a nice movie there

ChrisDH responds:

i bean using 25 framper sec so many i should but it up to 30 i fink i would help alot and your rught i shoulf but more keyframes in to put make it more smoother thank you very very much for the advice

thank so much

ChrisDH

[sk8adude21]

uhhh

it kinda sucked

ChrisDH responds:

fair engouth i spose it did suck

THanks for wAtchin

ChrisDH

[Smashing-Flash]

It was ok

Two tips for you, one is a two-in-one.
1. Work on your animation, maybe more keyframes.
And use some asing to make it less "jumpy".
2. Have a music loop that is twice as long so we don't hear that it starts over, especially since this is so short.

ChrisDH responds:

ok i get you loop the music that you very much for the advice

thank you for watching

ChrisDH