lmfao
that was some weird craap. but lol really funnyy
Reviews for "pls delete"
ook...
Topic was odd but it was funny
streached the joke out
sweet animation, but i felt that the joke was a little dragged out. Would have liked to see a twist.
Lol!
Nice work! It was short, sweet, and to the point. Very funny.
pretty good improv
"I respect your point of view. But this is a Music Video and it is hard to get jokes out based on visuals. Perhaps watch my other Flashes, that aren't Music Videos. And I am only just starting out, so maybe my future Flashes will be more toy our taste. Sorry to disappoint."
this is the response you gave to my first review on this site, of your flash "you make me feel so young". in retrospect, it was a juvenile review and i didn't judge the flash for what it was: a music video. i appreciate that you actually read it and responded, so i decided to take your advice and watch another one of your flashes.
visuals: good, nothing more could be asked of them, smooth animation
voice acting: good, like the nasal quality on Mr. Horse Face
writing/improv: okay, the pauses and "ummm"s aim to create a realistic feel and flow, but it feels somewhat like family guy in its "ehh yeah sorry" approach. at times it didnt feel realistic but instead felt like it was stalling for time. the writing is however backed up with stuff like characters breaking eye contact. this is more on the delivery side of things, but the flash seemed to have overstayed its welcome. it dragged on just a little too long after the initial punch line. luckily it ended barely after getting the awkward cringe laugh, didnt overstay its welcome too long and is fairly well executed improvisation.
i hope this has been constructive and i have viewed your work in context.
MyKindOfFlash responds:
Ha ha, I've never had someone respond to a review response in a review before. I appreciate your comments, man. Thanks for the rating!