good
its pretty good for a first time but there were low movement of the people he fought against but otherwise it's cool it deserves atleast a 7 slap me if i'm wrong
Reviews for "a day of madness"
Anveer responds:
lol i cont anyway thanx
it was good
could have been netter
Anveer responds:
wtf its better than a 5
Pretty bad.
I'm sorry, that was rather terrible, the fact that you didn't walk at all, there was no music the sound lagged and he teleports to places rather than going through doors
Also, don't try and rate up your own movies because this was SHIT!
Wow.
That was just plain horrid. I mean, even at 24fps, that still looked CHOPPY AS HELL.
Jesus christ man, try actually animating EVERY SINGLE FRAME, rather than having millions of long key frames everywhere.
OK well first off, all of the movements were shitty, unrealistic, and choppy. I couldn't even tell what was happening, and the fact that you misplaced the sprites and arranged them improperly didn't help at all. Nothing made sense at all.
You just had a guy run in and make a gun sound without actually aiming or moving the body at all, just throwing around random gun shots and not even putting any effort into falling or recoil. It looks like a statue running in and shooting people, but some how they fall in one millisecond.
Guns give kick back, use this.
But damn man, did you actually put any effort on this at all? It looks like you just copied and pasted random ass sprites any where. I mean, in the Hank and Jesus part, you couldn't even figure out where to put the hands on the guns, that would either prove that you are really lazy and didn't bother to look, or you lack common sense. Oh and where did he even get the chainsaw?
Also, why is it that (correct me if I'm wrong, it's too shitty to even comprehend what's going on) that the one main guy comes in and appears to be grabbing the two people, but then out of no where, two gun shots come up, yet there aren't any guns or anything?
And I don't give two shits if this is your first animation. That doesn't matter.
And I hate how you soak in all of the previous reviews that are obviously being WAAY TOO GENEROUS.
Here's a tip, maybe start looking at negative comments more than you look at positive comments, because just if a certain review is negative, doesn't mean it's because they hate you, it's because they hate to see your animation and want you to get better. And in your response to that one guy who gave a 5, no, it does not deserve a 5. I give this a vote of zero and a review score of zero.
Oh one more thing, if you want to actually start being known for good animations, try not shitting them out every two hours or so. I mean, try actually spending months or hell, even years on something to make something that people actually look forward to, rather than the regular "oh cool I submitted my movie an hour ago, and now I just finished my new one, I can't wait to submit!"
This will just give you a reputation as a lazy, shitty madness animator.
And god forbid you constantly submit shit for stats.
One final note, remember this extremely helpful advice;;
You'll never get better until you realize that you suck.
SERIOUSLY. When I realized I was horrible, I did everything I could to get better.
Hopefully you can save yourself before you make a big fool out of yourself.
You can only learn from negative comments.
WOW
OH MY GOOD THAT SUCKED