that's odd
I was expecting something at least approaching an animation, this is just a picture and an audio portal clip, seriously, you've made better pieces of work so try and maintain some of the effort in your flashes, and please it's spelled "time" not "teim", get some plotlines going, a couple of consistent characters maybe, and more than one picture
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Hooray a 1!
If you feel so guilty
Then why do you bother to keep putting this stuff here?! You haven't come up with a plot, but you have managed to find a decent tune on the audio portal to present. It's a shame that the artist there has to put up with your flash attached to his piece, as you've put no effort in, when he has spent a good amount of time on it.
Less effort than the Adolf Hitler Pokemon flash, which is going a long way. Your drawing style is frankly appalling and you really could use some more practice with your drawing tools - more zoom in and then using a smaller tool. This would give you a better looking image, as when you zoom back out, there would appear to be more detail. Trust me, it works!
I've seen Wegra Adventures as well, I know you can animate, so take it further. Download some tutorials and learn how to manipulate your images better and prove to us that a little effort can yield a big result.
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lalalalalalalalalalala
\m/
A random tune from the audio portal + some random dots on the canvas = dot of excellence 3.
At least PRETEND that you are trying to improve your flashes...
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OMG SO GOOD lul
Oh man please if your going to make us review things like this like I said in my last review at least make them funny in some way or do something with them. Well we are actually making some sort of new rule where we don't have to review submissions like this anymore so I guess this could be the last time that I complain about it. :D Oh well, on to the constructive part.. it needs animation, story, etc.. You did have audio, but a piece of audio and a picture doesn't make a flash sorry. :(
C52
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Hmmm
A picture with some music.
Just a crudely drawn image on a white background. Not really even classing it as a "movie". You need to work on your drawnings.
The sound was a little brash. The best things about the "movie" but still after a while it was quite annoying.
Overall, this needed animation and a story.And perhaps a loading screen
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I hope she made lotsa spaghetti!