Really Good
This is really good especially for a work in process as you already know the transition at 2:52 could of gone better and the intor could be shortened down a bit but overall This is Really good :D
I would add you if I had Facebook but I deleted it a while ago for personal reasons All I have is a Deviant Art account, A youtube account and of course a Newgrounds account :D
But Hey This is just a work in progress and it's on the top rated music of ALL TIME on Newgrounds so when you do that transition better and just mess around with some instruments a bit more I can see BIG THINGS coming for you mate. Sorry I'm going on a bit again aren't I Sorry A habit of mine I'll shut up now :D