it got boring after a while...
hearing him say gourmet shit all the time was funny at first btu then it just got boring. you need to expand it into an interesting story or cut it short.
Reviews for "Spatchcock Gourmet Pizza"
Good, but you can do better
Not a bad job, but the text is too much faster and I wasn't able to read everything. During some scene the background is too much dark to read something..
you need a slower text and a white background behind.
All that was missing was a phone number!
OMG that was so funny. You really could see some guy in Irvine Cali with this. To damn funny.
LOL
great voice acting and... OMG "not jews" this guy is f*$%#@*&! high
you should use some music, since this is an ad and most ads have theme songs
but it's okay
nice job
Eh... Complete miss for me.
I'm all for random comedy, but the tone of this whole flash was the same and I didn't get any spikes of laughter... I mean, you pulled off the boring worker well... But realism wasn't entertaining.
Just couldn't get into this one at all, 2/5 and 3/10. Try varying the mood in your flashes and the delivery would be a LOT better.