Not bad, though it could use some work.
This is a fairly useful tutorial for new users if they are having trouble getting started (I especially liked how the "tools" part of the tutorial had different parts of the Liveswif program as buttons), but it could use a little more information on how to use the tools, etc.
The graphics are decent, although the "tools" part of the tutorial looks a little crowded.
You definitely need to fix the sound, though, and like other reviews have said, the Liveswif link doesn't work.
Considering that this was made in Liveswif, which is not as feature-filled as Adobe Flash, this is alright, though like I said, it needs some more work.