Very funny :D
The animation was great, I liked how you made the shadows and everything. The most incredible things I saw was the background, not the best one I've seen but it good! The voice acting was excellent (I think it was the same voice actor for all of the characters, am I right?). Try putting some sound effects. You can find them at several places. This animation deserves to be on newgrounds. Keep up the good work! I know your next animation will be better. ^_^
Funny
Simple, funny, well-drawn and scripted with an unexpected ending.
You had a few jokes spread thruout and did a good job with such a short Flash.
Good job.
the jokes were lame but this time i tried to consentrate on the drawings
Okay
This was kinda funny... but the animation lacked a little...
Hmmm.
I think this is one of those movies that is better shown in Machinima, though I have to say, that the quality of script, the voice acting and the comedy all needs some work. By far the best part of this was the Grunt at the end of it. Unexpected and sudden. Thats probably the only tip I can offer to improve your writing.
Though if you just did this off the bat without any planning then I suppose its okay for starters. Graphics were fairly okay too.
My advice to viewers? Watch if you are easily amused.
That is all.
thanks for the input dude, worked more on the graphics
lol
It was fairly funny, you could have made it longer, with more of a point. I liked the Grunt, literally, at the end, however.