Reviews for Tywo At Large Ep. #2

[Coop]

Awesomely informative

Anoterh fine episode from Tywo and co. This time, showing us exactly what is going on with things in the lab in most of the wrong ways. And there wasn't even a naked flame in sight, which is the number one cause of accidents in the lab.

Mind you, letting Tywo run riot with a naked flame is probably not the best idea...

I love the way that you've gone for the black and white approach, showing us that the film has been made for the purposes of government safety education, which notoriously sucks balls.

I would have thrown in a few more examples here and there, as Tywo did have the basics right - he was wearing the correct safety equipment, so that's an excellent start. I'd suggest that you show us that he can actually do something right, for a change, as he does come across as somewhat of a jerk. Loveable, but still a jerk.

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[Little-Rena]

Pretty Good

This seems to be a pretty good flash, though didn't really find this one too funny in many ways, though it is pretty good. The style of this is also very good and done pretty well though the narration didn't seem to be that much of something like this sort of video, so maybe that could be worked on a bit if you plan on doing something like this again.

Animation here was good and the graphics where also very good, the black and white worked well with this I think, though there was one part with colour, not sure what you where trying there but okay. Overall a pretty decent flash and it definatly had it's moments, but lacked somethings I feel.

5/5

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Pixmintro responds:

The color part was just some strange half-baked idea I had to scare the crap out of the kids watching my presentation in Chemistry class.

[Haggard]

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Very great graphics and superb animations here again.
I think the black and white really fits the theme very well.

The voice acting is good again, but you should try to get all the voices to one volume level. The voice of Tywo was much louder than the one of the professor. Yes, Tywo was screaming most of the time, but those screams got a bit annoying, because they were so loud.
Also, sometimes the background music was louder than the professor, so you may have to work on that a bit, yet.

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[TheBellmaker]

Professional yet again.

Great quality animation. the voice acting was superb. I liked how the professor's voice sonded educated and matter-of-factly. You did a very good job of making this flash imitate a classic educational video. Noxious gasses are your nose and mouth's worst enemy!

suggestion: If you wanted to make this seem even more like a training video. You should put pictures with arrows showing actions like they do on the airplanes on the saftey card. Then it would be soo awesome.

10/10
5/5

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[phantomlassuk]

Vast improvement

This is a treat better sequel then number 1.

Graphics.8/10 This is where this movie hits it off the black and white, is just perfect. It made somehow the charctors more funnie,r and better looking it was like a old education lession.

Sound 9/10 Again this improved because of the hilarious voices you used for the teacher the screams from Tywo made. This is good as it all goes wrong.

Humor7/10 Funny as Tywo did all the wrong things the bird falling out of the tree. The teacher voice it was a spoof i liked the lesson.

This is so much better as i love the black and white, look the humor more funny and Tywo more clerer now. Its getting better as it, more detailed .

Overeall a good sequel improves on the first.

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