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Reviews for "Predator Who?"

dude awesome

dont listen to all the critics, this was funny, and i really enjoyed it, i laughed out loud, no kidding.

TheGuppy responds:

thnx dude tht really means sumthin if u lauged at it
my other stick movie is called "Do it To it" if u wanna
see it.....thnx again

Lets see.

Kinda lame, honestly. I can't say that it's horrible work for a second flash though. Work on stuff like making the animation smoother, coloring, and better graphics.

Decent for your second try. Keep up the work.

Well...

It was a stick battle...thats all I can say...please if you're going to put effort into it, don't make stick fights...

It was interesting.

-It was defiantly different. Try putting different animations with the lasers. That way, it will look like its shooting, and moving.
-Good choice of music, and the sounds were played at the right times. Sound syncing with objects is very important, don't forget that.
-if there is something that bothers you while your making your flash, like "this leg should go here," fix it. It is usually better to fix something, than to let a bunch of flaws take over your animation ethnics.

Hope that helps.

TheGuppy responds:

thnx fer the advice

Not Bad For Your First Animation

It Was Good & Fun To Watch... But I Think You Can Make A Really Good Animation
If You Spend More Time On Detail and shading. THE PREDITOR LOOKED REALLY GOOD!!! im chuffed to see that you can create a really cool charecter and stick to some of his features... Keep Up The Good Work!!!

TheGuppy responds:

it was actually my 2nd