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Very awesome animation! I'm really liking your style, however, I really think you should make the characters speak words, instead of the animal noises. I would really help with character development. But you still did an awesome job!!
Reviews for "Primal War 17"
Holy frekkin bejesus
You put some serious effort into this. I'll check out the previous entries as well. The art was amazing and the animation complimented it nicely. I don't know much about the story, so I won't speak of the characters too much. My first impression might be that they were all a bit similar in the way (everyone is max hardcore to the bone), you might want to throw in a few characters that charm as well as impress :) I know it's tough taking pointers from a person who hasn't seen everything yet, but I always look for any kind of criticism in my own work so I can improve, so here it is.
I think it can be truly epic if you have the diversity of characters, meaning there is something for everyone. This is not to say you didn't have diversity, I mean those dinomen were incredible! I'm an old dino-nut, so that put a smile on my face. I'm just saying: fill the world with wonder and the action will be more brutal :) Looking forward to checking out the previous entries and the upcoming ones.
Cheers, Michael
Excellent,just keep the modern guns out :).
Very nice series and your animation skills get better and better with every episode.I like the whole concept of beasts battling it out, a lot of action driven by a good storyline.
The only things that I think didn't make sense in the series was the use of modern guns(uzis etc...), it would be best in my opinion if you keep those out of the story as they don't fit with the rest. I can't wait for the next episode,keep them coming :P.
BEST
FAR THE BEST ANIMATION ON NEWGROUNDS I HAVE COME ACROSS. VISUALS ARE AMAZING AND THE STORY JUST KEEPS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER.
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I had followed the primal war since the begining, but this episode was worth waiting, and way better than the previous ones. Graphics were almost perfect, even if somehow the shamanic atmosphere of the series seems to have lost some of his originality with the adding of sub and magical powers. But keep up the good work !