Can't say I'm impressed, at all.
It actually is a good song, but the majority of it is sampled from the original, and to tell you the truth, I'm not sure If I can hear anything original in this track, since it's sampled, from the plucks to the basses.
I wouldn't classify this as a remake either, it just needs that little original touch that would make it sound that much better.
The only thing I can't recognize from the original is the 4-step beat, it gave it that little Skrillex feel, which every producer wants to make nowadays :P
Every now and then you introduced a new set of bars with a set of layered crashes, those were probably the worst thing I ever had to endure in my life, It's like you layered the entire Vengeance Crash folder, lower the volume and maybe add some reverb and delay.
What I'd also do to fix this is maybe add a break to it, it would sound really cool if it built up to something and then stop all of a sudden, leaving the listener hearing the bare minimum, and everything slowly starts filtering from a lowpass, kinda like the break in deadmau5 - Hey Baby [Instrumental]. Then add a breakbeat and bob's your uncle, Techno! :P
Anyway, I understand that you're a newcomer here but sampling from the entire song is frowned upon, and you'd get banned if this was your first submission.
It's good, it's just missing that original flare.
5/10
4/5
-decibel
