Confuzled
Which one is the albatross and which one is the seagull, I can't tell, It's upsetting!!! I HATE CHOO!!!
Confuzled
Which one is the albatross and which one is the seagull, I can't tell, It's upsetting!!! I HATE CHOO!!!
Nice
animation+1
but please stop the love stories
Animation was very well done
While I really enjoyed the animation style, the overall feel of the flash was less than desired. The lighting effects and motion of the birds was well though out, and the music was a refreshing touch... But the poor voice acting, accompanied with this attempt to sound profound really hindered my interest. I believe this flash would have done fine on its own without the use of words. They just distract the viewer away from the experience. It's just some constructive criticism, I'm not attempting to insult your work. Hope to see more soon.
Story
Nice flash, but the story was a bit diasappointing.
odd........ lol
great animation and artwork. Though the lines were odd. I can find no flaw in this movie. It's well exicuted and, though a bit kid-ish (like TSstudios below me said, it sounds like a childrens story you'd hear in school) it still feels mature. This is the kind of short NG lacks. It's poetic, kind, masterful in it's own way, yet, still makes you laugh a little. Mostly due to the Albatross's wonderfuly abstract and imaginitive lines.
This also feels like a mild romance to me (the Seagull is such a flirt), and the end seems said. Not exactly for the Albatross, but for the Seagull who sort of, should you say.... wanted the odd Albatross.
This is not my kind of thing I'd normally watch. But it has earned a place in my heart. Keep up the excellent work, and you may some day earn a place on NG next to Pico (who is uncomparable to this) and Bitey (who is comparable to this).
Brakenwood artwork is just as good as this, as well as the animation.
Great work. Loved it. I aspire to this quality of work.
ZWJ-5/5-10/10
P.S.- Sorry for the long review.