Reviews for All for the Love of Troy

[dirtshake]

Good and bad

You have a lot going for you but you also have a lot to improve on.
Story aside, since I hate anything associated with High School Musical, the animation wasn't bad. It was mainly tweens, but you know how to tween and make it look good. The fight scene in particular was good.

The gripe I have with tweening though is that it's too simple. You had a lot of great tweens, but what would have made it cooler is if you put some frame by frame in your movie. It takes longer, but you can make much better stuff. Overall there is more freedom with it.

Something you need to work on big time is pacing. Throughout the movie, save for the fight, there were many unnecisary and long awkward pauses where a character would make a very long facial expression or just stare into the abyss. The audio looping made this even more noticable and made those parts feel extra long.

Aside from these things, this was a good movie. Work on pacing and some frame by frame and your next movie will be better than this.

Good job and good luck.

LordHayden responds:

There is some FBF in this, but I try to avoid using it because I have a mouse.

[loonaetick]

Good idea

I think this would make a pretty awesome game

[dcfreak]

Very good

You just need to work in the animation. And you did well using the characters

[Spookhouse-Tiny]

Good quality, bad set up

You are an obviously talented person, but your story wasnt very pleasing to the public, well... i would have prefered to see that girl pull out her ninja stuff and get shot once in the head. Maybe even as far as the grenade bit, but that should have done the trick.

LordHayden responds:

That girl is Gabriella. She's very nice...not!

[czechmate76]

good idea, but something was amiss

idk, it just didnt scream watch me you know?! dont get me wrong it was defintily a good idea, but the quality and smoothness were defintly lacking, as well as the word bubbles they went away WAY to quick, i had a hard time reading what was being said, and the scenes where people just stand there, they need to be shorter. over all not bad, but could defintly be ALOT better.