Maybe its just not my thing.
I found it really dull and dreary. Not to sound generic, but I found it slow moving, fairly uneventfull and just mindlessly sad. The animation has high potential I will say that, but I just didn't get entertained by this. I don't mind what you were going for, but this kind of thing needs to be done really well.
I'm sure you're a good animator, I just didn't really like it.
What was the plot?
I really didn't like watching this clip. It was a bit too random. From my perspective, it looked like you were trying to have a more serious tone with your flash, but you definitely needed to know where you are going with this. Randomness usually does not make a serious clip.
I really liked your environmental drawings. The problem actually came when you introduced the characters. I... did not like... your characters. It must have been that block style. It just didn't seem to fit with the rest of the story... oh wait, there wasn't one?
I give you props on what you did in the flash, but I just wished there was a little more focus on some of its elements.
Ok...
And they both enjoyed bell-end together.
The End
That was the story so far as I understood it.
i didnt get it
wat was so good it was just a bunch of wierd bells
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this was quite boring... animation was taken too seriously for the level of work and detail put int it. maybe try comic animation instead of being so strict and blan with it.