READ THE DISCRIPTION
All I've seen are people whining about the story/plot.
HE SAYS IN THE DESCRIPTION THAT THERE IS NONE!
It was a music video and I seldom see a point in music videos besides looking cool.
Art needs no reason
Art needs no message
Art needs beauty and that's it!
Your animation skills aren't very good though.(at least in front page standards)
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I dint get the story line but the animation and idea where..... alright i gess. 3/5 6/10
Usually
I'm a nice guy but this seems to narutoesque and take many character looks from that awful show. The story was kinda pointless if the emo boy in the end isn't punished for what he did. Although the music was catchy the animation and story just didn't click.
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this was quite boring... animation was taken too seriously for the level of work and detail put int it. maybe try comic animation instead of being so strict and blan with it.
Ok...
And they both enjoyed bell-end together.
The End
That was the story so far as I understood it.