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Reviews for "A Skaters Day Out"

Right

Okay so the animation was alright only thing annoying me is how you make you skater ollie there's no pop no bent leg's hell the board does'nt have a nose or tail <_< everything was great but the skateboard/skater need's work on :D.

practice

the movie wasn't really bad, the sounds were ok (might need some more music)
the movement speed was good if ur wondering, i'd say this one gets saved.

Pointers

A couple of pointers on movement: When he's jumping, watch where the transformation point is. when he crouches before jumping, it should be touching the ground. When he goes up and down the ramp it should be closer to the back of the board, so try to edit the skater so the point is somewhere back there.

Curves such as jumping the dog are a big issue with any tween. Just mess with it and scrub as best you can. Hav you considered putting the skater on an invisible path?

I voted 0 because

1: He didnt move his legs when he jumped.
2: He had the same stance all the time. (The arms and legs could be moved while he skated)
3:The gore looked more like tomato sauce. (Try adding a darker red)
4: There werent any plot.
5: When he grinded it looked like a piece of cake (it isnt)
6 But most of all he didnt move at all! and that looked very stupid.

Hope you can use my advice!
Twizztat