Beautiful, but could use some touch-ups
Great moral we can all learn from. I can see how this could help people understand what it means to be physically different, but in all other respects the same. I do suggest adding in more shadowing into the fight scenes though. I'm just saying that they look to me like the manaquin you threw in at the end; lifeless. Also color in the tears to help highlight the main point. Amazing flash, otherwise.