good work
Yes it was short and lacked story, but what was done I found very intriguing. I think its something worth building on to find your style and voice. Maybe the cutsie will suit you more. Maybe the darker stuff. I think you might find a way to use them both that will compliment each other very well. Now I'd say just think of some short stories to develop it all. Great job overall. Keep workn. Keep growin. A lot of potentail.