Reviews for The Ipod Ad

[RyanTime2]

This flash has amazing potential.

I suggest a few things:
1.Shading
2.Better art
3.Submit audio to audio portal then use it and refer yourself, helpful.
4.Have more than just people dancing, add some jokes
5.(related with four) or if you don't like humor, (which is much easier since you won't need to do a story of realistic intelligence) you may use drama, serious shorts, or maybe evena horror spoof, anything can happen in NG.

I wish you the best of luck, you seem liek an honest new user from newgrounds. Bless ya! -RyanTime2

Killa117 responds:

Thanx for the tips i will take that to heart in my next flashes which are coming very soon. - Killa117

[dark-crow07]

Not bad

But not great either. It looked like those guys were gonna fall to pieces any minute. Also, you should of actionscripted the end so that the music stopped playing. If you click on play when the movies finished the song comes on again and it can get annoying.

Killa117 responds:

The problem is fixed thanx for telling me - Killa117

[cogitosum666]

not bad, but...

You took way too long to make the joke. I lost interest and was starting to suspect the animation was just going to loop forever when you finally ended it.
That said, it was funny.
Your handle on flash is good, but your animation could be improved.
Also, the word is "endorsed" with an 'e' not an 'i'.

Killa117 responds:

This was for a School assignment it had to be kinda serious thanx for tips anyway - Killa117

[OctoFlash]

cool

not bad for your first try!

Killa117 responds:

Thanx for you support - Killa117

[dagothpimplord1]

sad

i have a mac and that music WASNT created it was mostly copyed from the tunes that
garage band alreadey has in it sad...

Killa117 responds:

I know i don't own a mac and i hate garageband I had to have it for a school assignment anyway thanx for telling me -Killa117