hmmmm
Well , I like the song and the animation. The reason I'm giving you a six is because I've already seen somthing like this ! It's almost a copy. Further : great animation.
Reviews for "The Hardware Store"
Edited?
You didn't bother to do the whole song? What is up with that? That's the only thing that's preventing me from giving you a perfect 10.
Pretty good
I love Weird Al, and I enjoyed your interpretation of this song. Unfortunately, I couldn't help but compare it to the version already on this site, and yours falls short of what I was expecting after having seen that. I don't know the url, but it's in the Weird Al collection. You could take some pointers from the creator of that one. Plus, as everyone else has said, you didn't use the whole song, though you wouldn't really notice unless you'd heard it before (it was smoothly cut, I say). xD
Lythero responds:
"(it was smoothly cut, I say)"
HA. I'm glad you noticed. I spent longer trying to get the sound edited right than you'd think. Cause I had the full song imported, then I lost the mp3 file, and had to download it again to edit out the last verse, but the start timing was DIFFERENT (god damnit). So what you hear is actually one song, then another overlapped right at the start, and then there's the cut of course.
I saw the WoW machinima one years ago and I think that was the reason I tried to make this too. Anyways. I know it ain't that great and it's been done before. I'll make up for it next time ^^;
You left out the best part!
You need to do the part with the tools being listed! That's the bet part of the song! For that, you lose many points. If you had that part of the song, you'd break through 4/5 easily.
However, it is only a 3, for now.
very good, but heres a hint if you wan't to redo
on youtube someone posted a hareware video like yours, though it's machina, you could get a few hints for this if you should ever wish to redo it;
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rwh1MW g1LLA
P.s. as most people said before me, the list bit that you cut was the best bit, ow well :)