Nice!
Hey, cool. Very dramatic, nice horror movie sort of feel.
I don't want to sound critical, but it could always use more work. I'd like to suggest the movements be a little faster. Not smoothed or anything like that, it just seems like things move slowly. Camera pans slow, people walk slow, ect. Just sor of... speed it up a little. That's all.
You know what would be great for the next episode? A little text window on the side with messages from Norton and the computer and stuff, that you could turn on and off. Just, you know, status messages and messages that coincide with events in the movie. That'd be a nice effect.
One more thing that could probably be easy to do. Motion blurs would make the animation look great, and could probably be done pretty easily.
A last request for the rest of the series: let the names and story and such alone. The constant changes are a little unsettling. I kept thinking, who is Render? You called him something else before. Blue or aqua or something. I was a bit confused for a while. And what happened to that polywhatsit storyline you were going to do?
Overall, though, it's great. Voice acting is good, graphics are stylish, and music oddly fits. A great series, and I look forward to new episodes.