Reviews for 3D Animation Test

[Bezman]

Good models but not entertaining.

Well, these models look fine. They'd look great in a 3D animation of this quality.

I assume the ribbons leading into the miniguns is meant to be a roll of bullets? Modelling some bulletes on that would make a big difference.

I also noticed to ugly white spots appearing in the front of the guns on the rotating turret, where there shouldn't have really been any. Only a small issue though.

Essentially, this all looks good but I can't give a high score because it's not entertaining to me.

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[Coop]

Take it further

So we've got the examples of your 3-D rendering of a twin-linked minigun. It doesn't look bad, which is certainly a bonus. That's where it stops, as you need to put it onto a flash so that we can see how it would look, partuicularly when firing and objects or characters are getting filled with hot lead.

Good lateral movement in the bottom left, all gun barrels spin well, but overall, it could do with more depth - both of the context and of the colour scheme.

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[Little-Rena]

Bleh

Yeah okay, the artwork looks good and the animation is also very nice, though a little slow. There isn't really much else here though, no sound or anything really worth watching, so it has no real entertainment value, I'm not really a big fan of watching peoples tests on Newgrounds. I would suggest uploading it to a host then posting a topic in the flash section for test feedback.

It might be nice to see what you can do with this though, you could have had some short clips with interaction between scenes, give them a background and everything, just to look nice. Otherwise it's nothing more than a test, good luck with other works.

0/5

<3

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[Viridis]

Cool

This is a pretty cool thing here, not much, but what is here isnt bad. id like to see this incoporated into an actual movie or game though.
The bottom right gun looked better than the others, more detail on it, also there was an annoying glitchy thing on the top gun, left hand side, though im sure you know this already.
Good models, i cant really say much on this as it was only a test, but id like to see what you can do with your 3D object making expertise :P
Hoping to see more.

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[Haggard]

\m/

Well, I liked the bottom right turret best, because it seems to have more details than the other guns.

The top gun has an annoying pixel error on the left hand side, so that it looks like the left side is always "moving". The bottom left gun looked quite ugly when it showed it's front to the viewer because suddendly all the barrels just dissappeared, leaving some kind of a "blank spot" there.

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