wow!!!...omg awesome.... but..
wow.. i have to say i thought that it was great! The intro had me completely entrancanced! it felt so well written and proffesional and the voice actor made it perfect. it is clear that loads of effort had gone into the writing of the plot. the whole ideA of the flash was gripping and i looked forward to when the flash actually began.
unfortunently...that was when the definant 5/5 and 10/10 flash turned into a 4/5 and 9/10. it is clear that you have great animating skills and are a really good character designer.. the flash was almost perfect but what makes the flash a 3.7 and not a 4.10 + is the fact that you have not really mastered how to make a flash flow.
... it felt kind of sloppy and not put together very well.... a random battle scene that seemed to just be a random final fantasy fight with an enemy just was odd and didnt fit anywhere... and then it went to some sort of thing being blown up and then a random crash,,,,,, i got dissapointed at this point and turned it off....
ive been over critical of your work not because i hated it .. but because i can see the potential for a great animater and a great series going to waste. you are perfect on everything except for the flow of how the flash is put together! and the final fantasy music kind of took away from the individuality of the series and made it like a tribute to ff cheapening it all!
to finish it off, i have to say that this was great. the animation and graphics were perfect and time has gone into a brilliant compelling story.. i can see ULTIMATE potential here for you... but unless u kind of put it together properly.. it just feels messy and turns people off!
look forward to seeing more great work from u in the future!
4/5 9/10
chris