fast review go!
first at :47 after that climb i think there should be a big hit or crash
second at the end of the first dub break at 1:04 where it says "die" and then what sounds like cps the cps part should have a sudden steep climb and then is you can hold out the s in cps
third at 1:37 make its volume climb slowly but enough to really feel it get loud then at 1:54 keep that drop but at 1:56 make that hit, hit even harder but still back off a little for that synth
fourth at 2:25 do the same thing with the cps sound as i stated earlier and add a hit to the entrance of the end of the song but dont back off a whole lot and let the volume climb but barely it should be like you dont really hear when you casually listen to it but its there when you look for it
i hope this helped im best with dynamics and stuff so its what i tried to focus on
the rest of the song as a whole is really good
whats my time >:)