Reviews for Larry The Knight

[DeTi]

umm

Im sorry about the six but.. well im just going to tell you the pros and cons.. in my opinion at least.

Pros - Good graphics, Plot and idea.
Cons- Slow story line, Larry is to dull and his voice is dull aswell.

Advice- Maybe add character to spicen the story line up.. maybe a side kick or something.. maybe a arch enemy who wants to slay the dragon first. Also maybe add some extra scenes .. maybe a scene where he gets lit on fire or gets trapped and is begging the donkey for help.. i dont know.. you could do it.. i know your next one will be a hit.. if you maybe just get some other people to get involved .. maybe ask a friend or relative with a funny voice to take part in it.

Cryomancer responds:

Well we've already written the scripts for the series, this one might seem a little slow but our aim is to introduce the characters and set up the story.

Rest assured, the following episodes will introduce new characters and we've got some great storylines too.

[MrMacro]

Good

Nice art/animation. some of the joke swere good too.

Cryomancer responds:

Thanks dude, glad you enjoyed it!

[matrixwolf]

Awesome Toon!

Can't wait to see more from Larry!

Cryomancer responds:

Thanks man!
Glad you enjoyed it! =P

[gggp]

That was cool

Cant wait for the next part...will theare be a next part?

Cryomancer responds:

Indeed my friend. Larry will return in episode 2 - the continuation of his epic journey. And since the introductions are over with, there'll be a lot more to the story as he takes his first steps towards the dragons lair.

Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for leaving a review.

[Coop]

Well designed and presented

This is a nicely made flash that makes me look forward into the next episode. It could have done with more development of the plot, as with the file size, you could have got us to the completion of this tale at the very least.

I think that the character traits have been well explored this time and that you've given us a nice insight into the character of Larry as a whole, with his penchant for talking to himself and passing it off as the horse talking back to him. Mr. Snuggles was a nice addition as well.

I'd like to see how he handles himself in a fight, as he could be super badass, but no-one ever gives him a chance due to his physique and obvious deficiencies socially. Alternatively, he could just suck at that as well, which would be such a cliche :P

Let me know when the next episode is out, I'm interested in finding out the end of the tale.

[Review Request Club]

Cryomancer responds:

We've split the overall story into segments, some are longer than others but honestly we didnt want to commit to much to the first episode as its kind of a pilot.

But now its out, we've started on Larry II and will continue with the 6 episode series.

As for how Larry handles himself in a fight, he certainly brags a lot about how strong he is but seems to lack confidence at times. Either way, he's hunting down the dragon....So we'll see what happens soon enough!

Thanks for leaving a review man, glad you enjoyed it!