good concept...
the concept of the game was good and looking at the fact that it is your first flash game and that it was made for school, i cant really criticize it too much. the basic concept of the game was good but you should consider adding some real interactivity to your games in the future. in essence, this is a relatively thought out slide show with background music. i did enjoy the game, but next time you should try adding a really defined storyline that will immerse the player into the game. something that will really draw a person's attention. you should also consider adding some kind of puzzles or riddles for players to solve. The game needs improvement, no doubt about it but i still enjoyed it none the less and i always like to see new people try and "wow" the viewers on newgrounds like many other have. you keep on trying your best and soon you will be as good as some of the best. i rate the game a 3/5 and 7/10 for basic concept, immersing background music, and overall style of the game. im being very lenient on the rating because you cant really expect too much from somebody's first attempt at something. :D