Good looking but...
Thanks for the contribution. I enjoyed the beautiful graphics and your music was very suspenseful and appropriate.
However, I agree with a lot in that there's very little "game" and more about the story. More linear progression of notebook placement and some simple puzzles would have drawn-out (in a good way) your suspense and had players more concerned about their untimely cessation.
That being said, I'm really looking forward to your next game!!
cool
i really liked graphics and idea but is only ending bang?? i looked around but cant find anythng. awsome tho :P
im going to make a sequel.
storyline was good
It was a good story line, I don't know I i would consider this a game though. More like an interactive story. But nonetheless it was interesting and suspenseful.
Good creepy fun...
This could be a great introduction to a game based around the ideas you put together in this flash. The imagery plus the music made for a AWESOME atmosphere. Good flash for your first try. I'm looking forward to something with puzzles and alternative endings sometime in the future. :3
wheres the pot
did you pay attention to your story this is crazy