Still a work in progress
Every part of this music are good, as it always have been with all your music, but they don't fit well together, or maybe the transition between them seem strange and uncoordinated, aside from the one at 3:15.
Score seem fair for a work in progress, but this is still a bit far from the never ending awsomeness you have been feeding us all these years.
It's only one song tough, definitely can't wait to see the final version.
good at first
I would prefer you would continue the song as in the first 30secs as i dont much of the rest. Just my opinion though
I concur with the preceding reviewers.
I would agree with what some other people have said that this song is a bit disjointed. I think the trick is the changes in mood that you describe--the chaotic part is practically atonal, with an extremely heavy beat, whereas, the twilighty part has a clearly defined melody and is occasionally without drums. I do normally like songs with mood changes and similar shifting, but the ones in this song are so extreme that they're disruptive to my listening. (Just as I appreciate eating cake but not giant blocks of sugar, if you'll pardon a bizarre metaphor.) 1:41, 2:59, and 2:23 are particularly disorienting transitions and could be improved significantly.
I would, however, also agree that the individual parts are pretty good, and at the same time I really appreciate the part at the end (from 3:12 on) when the two are fused together: that's probably my favorite part of the song. In general, if you made the two separate parts more similar to each other, and/or made the segues between them more gradual (although the sudden, sharp changes _within_ the chaotic part were quite cool.) the piece would be improved.
This is a lot different than your other works.
Whether that's for the good, you decide.
There is a lot of jumping around through the transitions, and that I didn't like too much. The intro, couldn't be better though. Mainly, toward the second-half of the song there just a bunch of stuff heaped together. But knowing that the song isnt done yet boosted my spirits :D
Nice
Nice