Pretty okay.
This is an alright song, although the vox remind me of Green day for some reason. A previous review said it was missing something, and I agree. You need some bass in there to make the sound fatter. The guitar is also a bit weak, you should consider overdubbing it. Overall, nice work.
I liked it . . . kinda
The singing reminded me of incubus, whom I have heard way too much in my life and would like to never hear again. This is why even though you did a good job with the song, I would never download it, the singing gets on my nerves (its good though, just a style I don't like). Anyways cool guitar stuff, and a decent drum beat in the back. I think the drums could have been a bit more loose and not so repetative. I also think the guitar at the intro was cool, but it seemed to be lacking something, I would fiddle around with that riff if I was you and try to figure out something just a little better. Keep on rockin in the free world.
Thanks for the review. I mainly submitted this because I'm proud of the guitar stuff, the lyrics are kinda dumb and I sing too forced and not very accurately in-key.
The intro riff is actually a one-string-at-a-time variation of the main riff (which you hear when the drums kick in), so I think it serves fine, but it's an interesting remark. Hope you'll listen to some of my other stuff too.