Sorry, it lacked punch.
While the overall song was great, the hook draws you close, your voice hits you deep and the harmonization is perfect... But in the end, you're left wanting a more, possibly that dramatic is what you're missing. Unfortunately it's my opinion only and I could just be a douchebag. Maybe I'm just listening to too much rock.
lyrics are good
i like how you crossed these lyrics really good but i find the backround music is waaay to repetitive...... sufice to say more build up and flow is what this REALLY needs like the real feeling of wanting to hear u scream
my thoughts..... but lyrics good.....but voice melody could have WAY more power...
it's ...alright
nope
not fantastic