The Jokes Had A Really Good Timing
Nothing Else To Say(Cause I Can't Get Any Words Out,Laughing So Hard)
Reviews for "Kirby's mishaps"
ThePigeonMaster responds:
LOLOL! XD Thanks! I apreciate that!
Not bad
just wasnt very funny. it was good animation, the whole ballon dee everywhere wasnt exactly very good, and when he became the rock in the fiight with meta knight, you couldve found a sprite for the real rock kirby. also, ive seen that first seen before. not sure who it was tho
ThePigeonMaster responds:
wait... really? where did u watch that? =o
well, If you find it I'm telling you that I didn't copy anything. =)
Man...
I'm a sucker for a Kirby flick. This was awexome!
Lack of Ideas
I was able to predict any single joke you made in this flash, and i really don´t like it when i can pull that off...
The running gag wasn´t really funny too, i just don´t know why, it didn´t made me even grin. Maybe because it was just a fart joke.
Try to find a way to get around these dialogue boxes, they kinda annoyed me. A simple angry looking face on Kirby would´ve spared the "Now you´re asking for it!" part.
My conclusion: You definitely have the potencial to become a great flash artist, the only thing you seem to lack is creativity. Graphics and Sound was well made and for the sound well chosen. I´m awaiting your next flash, and I hope I´ll laugh my ass off then :)
Woooo, criticsm, i bet everyone will now rate this review down -.-"
ThePigeonMaster responds:
meh! don't worry I don't feel bad =) And ur right with the 1rst scene... Actually this is the truly "1rst review" that I got. It has reasons why did u gave the submission that vote and a conclusion that is really true!
XD
Nice
I enjoyed this very much, man. The humor's good and it's original. Great job. :)