I like the style.
It gets a solid 7, this flash has good solid animation with an easy to follow plotline. The one thing it lacks is sound, I don't mean gunshots and planes I mean things like the sound of an old reel projector and the inteludes of text on the screen. SOmetimes at these silent films you would hear a pianist picking away at a tune for the selected reel. Add that stuff and you will have a very era correct and enjoyable flash. Also try to make it black and white with a bit of screen shake. Good job I like your skills and I hope to see more.