hmmmm
Was a pretty interesting story line, and loved the ending :)
The somewhat bad attempt at beat boxing was a bit of a laugh apart from i was slightly put off by part of the song involved somebody screeching "arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrh" over and over again which kinda put me off the song until near the end.
apart from that, good animation, simple style, averagely good story line bording on good ;)
keep up the good work