Wow...
This brings back memories... That book was old, I remember reading it as a kid. Great animation. I'll be looking forward to your future submissions!
Reviews for "Very Hungry Caterpillar"
DavidBurgess responds:
Wow. I didn't expect anyone to actually like this. Thanks a lot.
lol
i remeber that story from kinder garden nice flash
soild
a lil too basic, but still good
no flash loader... be more prepared next time!
i don't know how the others didn't pick this up... maybe I'm the first to be watching this on dial-up...
before you post any more of your work, check out the following link:
you didn't add a flash loader at the start which means, for people in my situation, we get a choppy, bit-by-bit story. The second time around it worked ok though.
I'm not trying to be harsh but this is a fairly crucial, non-negotiable element of any animation on this site.
DavidBurgess responds:
I did. I added it it in. You know what happened? It screwed the whole thing up. I had to close without saving and re-export my SWF. Apparently, that preloader is written in Actionscript 2.0, and this was made in 3.0. Seeing as how I'm simply posting up something I made long before considering putting it into here, and I have no idea whatsoever how to save to a 2.0 format short of copy/pasting each frame, I had to do without. Sorry.
err...
I remember the story from back in they day but...
You coulda done a bit better I think... used some more frames... had a loading screen... which would also get rid of the annoying never ending loop...
I liked it but it could have been done MUCH better...
DavidBurgess responds:
Yeah, this is my first animated work of more than 20 frames. I wasn't hoping for a masterpiece. And if you look just a bit down, you can read my response as to why this lacks a loading screen.