Inspiring!
This was almost a cancel and blam thing for me but for some reason my head kept it going. The narrative is what makes this a good flash, art is in a medium rarely used and the background music gives a sad impression. Over-all I did like it, there is a message to be had here Good Job keep up the good work.
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I guess it's good but it has that weird Max Pain kinda style....
(Nice art work)
Wow
Amazing how so simple a piece can inspire emotion. I wanted nothing more than to cuff the guy to a railing to make him stop hurting himself. I especially like how relates to experiences in daily life. People do a lot of things every day that witnesses can't begin to explain, sometimes leaving them with memories- good or bad- that simply won't go away. Nice job capturing that, if that was in any part of your intent.
ufcfighterx and painhammer12- Whatever.
Cheers.
- Crow
This is more of a presentation then a flash video
If you want people to appreciate your work then you should make it move instead of that. And add colors so the people will appreciate it more. Ty to make a VIDEO about this treat this as a story board.And make sure the next video will have color and will move.
Atmopsheric
Well that was damn good 5 outta 5 from me, my only nitpick is that the sketches were a little rough, not in a bad way but it made them difficult to see on some of them, if the colour of the outline was a little darker it would be perfect.
The simple hand drawn style of the pictures is what I think made this work so well it made it very atmospheric and the punch line at the end was more sad than funny which is obviously the point. Well done, Hope you do other like this. (with darker outlining)