Dude finish it
Really good start but that keep the spectator in the grey zone, no ending, no real story or streamline, but definitly really good looking art.
Keep up the good work
4/5 - 7/10
Reviews for "A Forgotten Piece: A Duel"
WOOOOW :D
I really enjoyed this animation, even though there isn't a background story and it was 2 short, it still deserves a 10 :)
Can't wait till the next part is being uploaded :)
Not bad...
Like others have said already, this has some potential. However, there's not much variation in movement and the music doesn't seem to fit. The music calls for constant action, not just a quick sprint or flash from A to B and then 3-4 seconds of them staring each other down.
If this was meant to be a preview of more to come (which I don't think it is), then you should have added a release date, like "Coming Soon, Summer 2008". You know, something that won't piss people off after they watched a flash that was abruptly cut off.
You've got a good start, now find a good finish!
agreed with moistzombie
as already said, there is a lot of potnetila in this flash. But it's unfinished and that annoys... so just 2/5 and 3/10
Very much enjoyed!
The style you used in your flash was a great idea! It reminded me of a comic book jumping right at you. Also the color scheme, the music, the way your charcters moved where all in tune with each other which really worked so well with one another.
This is a great flash and I high recommend it and I hope to see more of your work in the future.