very good
very good stick movie and it's not shit it's very good
Reviews for "Ninja In The Forest"
its ok
the voices could use some work and it could use some music or something though. on the upside, the graphics were good.
JayLittle responds:
Appreciate ur reveiw & ur pointers hav bin noted
:)
Sorry if this is harsh
The animation isn't bad, however coupled with low recording quality and lack of sound FX, not to mention music, this could have done better. All you need to do is dig up a big load of sounds, and some suitable tunes, add a new layer to the .fla, and start adding it in. Re-recording the voices wouldn't hurt either. Be smart and you can overhaul the whole thing, not to mention your score.
JayLittle responds:
No definitely not harsh.
I hear what your saying, however i purposely posted this unedited.
I wanted 2 post it how it wos without alterin.
As i stated it is an old file & i wanted 2 see if i've improved so i plan to use that flawed version to rival and test the sequel.
"IF" the sequel happens all the flaws you notice in this film will be corrected :)
(hopefull_lol)
Not bad
From What i saw what good,But from what i heard (Which was practically Nothing but Words From the characters) was a little less then i expected..Where's The Pow,Boom,Wham,Slash,Wind,running noises,And other Sound Effects that shoulda been in there?..Overall it looks like it could turn out to be a good story so 6 stars for you
JayLittle responds:
Appreciate your review, view the response I gave to "Ninja-Kow"(2 reviews below) for my response. :)
Say What???
Might be good, but the voices need work (could only understand a little of what was said), and put a "to be continued" at the end and don't let it re-loop.
JayLittle responds:
Thanks, & next time it shall be done. :)