SDF
this was pretty funny! make the actual size of the screen bigger! cant wait to see what happens next...5/5! Good Job! nice animation!
SDF
this was pretty funny! make the actual size of the screen bigger! cant wait to see what happens next...5/5! Good Job! nice animation!
Good...
I think the longer version will be hilarious : ) My only complaint is the speed of the text... I'm a fast reader but the size of the text and the random location on the page made it difficult to read... I would suggest either making it (click to go) or just slowing it down... Can't wait to see "the real thing" Props homie ha ha
Thanks for the review, i'll slow it down, i read at a rediculous speed so it's hard to imagine reading slower, sorry!
only one problem
It seemed alright. I liked the music remix. There was just one problem. I could hardly read anything. The speech bubbles were WAY too quick. They didn't stay on the screen long enough. Change that, and I think you'll be alright.
Yea i'm gonna fix that in episode 2