That was pretty damn good for your first flash!
Great Flash!
Reviews for "Bardock vs Turles"
OLD293 responds:
Thx :D
That was a good start.
It's not a bad start, a lot better than alot of things that have past. First the good: You made the sounds sync very well with the animation, you had good quality in the sounds, you had an actual back ground/that looked nice, and the sprites looked good.
Now the bad bits: You pretty much had the same background with little movement for a good streach; it detracts from the illusion of movement/speed, The sprites need more in-between movement or at least giveing them an after image (so it will look like they were actually moveing and not just replaceing one sprite with another), Adding some blurr to them would also help to show movement, Finally scaleing the sounds to fit how far they are in the background would give it a better touch.
Lastly, I know who Bardock an Turles are, but they have no reason for fighting. When you make a fight scene It's best to have a little story behind it, espacially if you are useing established characters from a series. At current, it's mediocre but you can get better and bring some good stuff to the table. Good Luck and God Speed. (b^_^)b 3/5 5/10
OLD293 responds:
Thx, i'll try to get a little more creative the next time...I plan on making another movie soon and this one will have a storyline
nice
Wow, your first flash movie? Good job! Gave you an extra point just for that man, really imrpessive for a first movie. The only places I would like to see improvement would be a preloader (I think that would solve a few of the pacing problems), it seemed to go from fast paced to slow paced fist fighting too often, more music and sounds would be appreciated. Also, when a selection can be made on who to win, it is a good idea to put a button that brings you back to the selection so you don't have to watch the whole thing again. Looking forward to more of your work, keep it up!
OLD293 responds:
I think i'll try to add a preloader to it, and with the limited sounds I had it wasn't much I could do, guess I need to look around more, but anyway thx for the tips and review :)
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