That hurt my soul...
Seriously...really? Ah well, I don't think you were really expecting to get a frontpage with this...anyways, some tips for improvement.
-Don't steal jokes from family guy. I stopped watching at the "it ain't easy bein cheesy" part, but I'm pretty sure it doesn't get any better from there.
-Don't use the default text. It is hideous to look at, even with italics.
-So many rainbows! Bad!
-also, the song was kinda emo. Just sayin...