Deserved
That happened if you telephone while your driving !
Reviews for "Alex Seryoua: Episode I"
danomano65 responds:
hahahahaha everyone that uses a phone while driving should be abducted by aliens.
Great stuff! More please!
It was absolutely awesome. I loved the design of the alien complex and the way the bio-suit worked. You also picked a great voice actress for the role of Alex. How about some VA love in the author comments?
The only flaws I can think of are it's too short and the running animation looked pretty stiff and forced.
I would have used some music from Newgrounds if I were you. Not because the HL music sounds bad, on the contrary. I fully expect you to be able to go to DVD with this series, but in order to cash in on it you'll need to change the music. So that's kind of a shame.
Also, the whole Alex/Half-Life association makes it feel kinda derivitive, and the aliens look kinda like Vortigaunts, so... yeah, it feels a little derivitive. I probably would have named her somehting other than Alex just to avoid that whole comparison. But I don't think anyone would call this plagiarism. Just a little "familiar."
The storytelling seems great, too. The reason I say that is because they IMPLY so much without actually really GIVING any information directly to the audience at this early point. And you've got three writers going in on this? I am looking forward to this one!
danomano65 responds:
well, i understand the music suggestion. i may do that. also, you may not believe me, but i've played all of half-life and totally missed the name Alex association. i just liked the name with the last name. i'm really not trying to parallel. but i will look into the music thing.
DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
man that was soon freaking asome man damn!!!!!!!!!!!love it !!
Sexy
Loved this really top work.. Talking about camera angles, really really well done.. Really well done movie, loved the story line also
Luke
Interesting
At first, I thought it was bound to be some random flash until the abduction. then it just went from mundane to awesome.
Can't wait for the next one!
One piece of advice: add captions please
5/5 - 10/10