I'm Dizzy
Looks fantastic. I wish the camera wouldn't move like that, it made it hard to watch. Besides the walking animation, I thought it was perfect.
Reviews for "Alex Seryoua: Episode I"
danomano65 responds:
i realize that, i have to do some work on the walking. but who doesn't really.
The hell?
They abduct her, clone(?) her and give her a power suit so that she can kill them? What the hell? That's like stealing a squirrel and giving it a chainsaw to go nuts with.
danomano65 responds:
there were no clones, similar facial structure. why would they genetically render a beard on her??? i'll make that more distinct.
nice start...
nice detail, a bit jerky on the animation .... and a logic bomb in the first episode (but not knowing what happens next it might not be....)
u kidnap someone and bestow them with weapons so they can kill u with ease and try to escape?.....
hope this makes sense in the next episodes....
I really didn't want to review but..
Everyone is kind of right, this episode moved wayy to quickly. I seen a preview of this episode before and highly anticipated this episode to be one of the best on NG. Yet it seems after the phone call was over you dropped the ball and sped things up 2x faster with the movie going from 0-60 in seconds. I know you want to leave the viewer questioning but don't leave the viewer utterly confused to what they just witnessed.
Over all the art was impressive but when she walked seemed awkward. Sound was great and the story seems interesting (i guess, cause I have no clue whats happening) so I'll just stay tuned to see whats next.
suggestion
don't import a pic of the earth like that. Your movie is less detailed than that image. Open up photoshop or some equivalent and run it through some filters first so it looks more like the rest of your scene. Interesting short...... it's well done, but it's hard to tell where you're going with it. Needs an actual story, which can't be done in the length you gave it.