Reviews for Alex Seryoua: Episode I

[Dangerzone15]

meh

i admit it was interesting but some things didn't make any sense i reckon you should of put more detail into the animation so the watchers know whats going on and think of the choices a average human would make in a situation like this i admit there are a lot of assholes in this world but when you see other people trapped that need help you would at least try and help them specially if you know their gonna be dissected like lab rats anyway you have potential i hope in episode 2 it explains a bit more of what happened in episode 1

[manopoly12]

sweet

Good work my man.people are making comments about the storyline.well at least the graphics are sweet. in plus storyline or not it has action. also Im pretty sure making this is not easy.keep it up man.

[uzmike222]

It was cool.

It was pretty cool. The animation could be better and it was a bit weird at times.

I've read your response for CombineAdvisor and I still think there your explanation on the full story is still full of weird plot holes and a few of the things don't make sense. For example, when you say, "Apollo 13 was an alien attack," how was that mission an alien attack, when the astronauts were just sent to the moon to make some observations. And where did the astronauts make contact with the aliens and how did that go? Another was Rosewell. That was back in 1947; way before we even thought about going into space and our relations with the Soviet Union was deteriorating then.

The whole second paragraph didn't make any sense at all either. Why would the aliens take over the United States alone with subtlety and not take over the entire world with brute force? And how is the main heroine a good candidate into the plan of the aliens taking over the US? Also, how were the humans who were captured corrupted and what were they implanted with? A tracking device? An electrical collar, but only its internal?

There's just so much questions that are not answered, it's completely confusing. If the plot holes were fixed and most of the questions were answered, it could become a good flash series.

[CombineAdvisor]

whoooa watch out for the plotholes

first of all i totally agree w/ lazyd3vil
and why the hell did the aliens give her a F******* super-suit
and more than that one that can easily kill them

u gotta think of a logical story

danomano65 responds:

Well back when i was going to make this into a series, her supersuit was programmed to restrict her, yet the aliens that you see come into the chamber are working for a secret operation, and reprogrammed it to not restrict her but to obey her every thought or command. Those aliens were harvested by the US government to infiltrate the alien base on the moon, which is where humans first came into contact with aliens. An astronaut gets a spore caught on his suit from one of the beings and the spore is taken by the agency, which is how they create their own alien agents since these things are asexual. Apollo 13 was an alien attack, and a warning for us to not return to the moon, and Roswell was a failed drop ship that the government covered up by planting fake alien bodies to keep people from finding out that there were human bodies asleep inside.

she is then released and gets aboard one of their automatic drop ships that take the people back to their homes after they are successfully implanted and corrupted. she is on a campaign team for one of the senators running for presidency and would be a candidate for integration into the plan. the senator is corrupted and the alien race is a step away from taking over the United States, which is where Alex would come in. an unlikely but cool female super hero to counter balance all the male superheroes out there.

logical? too bad I never really pursued it. its a big project, probably something I could attempt later in my career. but thats pretty much the gist of it.

[lazyd3vil]

how do u

fucking bitch wakes up without a good reason IN A COMBAT SUIT (not force jacket) and starts slaughtering the evil alien invaders (just like Gordon Freeman). Also, instead of waking the other ppl up, she decides to leave them to be subjects to painful experiments and ... probably go save the world or smthing... GREAT ANIMATION but the guy with the storyline should be nailed to the cross.