Reviews for Fly Away - First Flash

[Nomader]

Beautiful.

I've gotta say, this was simply magnificent stuff here -- you have talent. :D

For starters, the animation was beautiful. Everything was smooth, and truth be told, you drew like a pro. I loved the anime design you put into your characters, and it felt natural and looked great. Normally I'd say that you should have a nicer background than just white, but for a first flash, I'm more than happy to let it slide.

There's a major problem though... you need sound pretty badly -- with just some sort of classical tune in the background, this would easily be one of the best flashes I've seen on Newgrounds for a long time...

G'luck!

ChiChiRoma responds:

...Magnificent? Thanks. XD
I didn't even know how to import sound when I made this. *serious noob* But I do now, hopefully I can make up the missing colour and sound next time I do this. =]

[Endo-K]

WOW.

I see your into anime. You will come far in Newgrounds.

For a first flash it was excellent. For future movies, you should consider:
Sound
Colour (Unless you intend on a style of B&W)
A Better story line (Plot)
Graphics were pretty good, and so was animation.
all I can say on that part is you will in time move up to higher frame rates, making your flash smoother.

Overall I give this a 10/10. Especially for a first flash. Great job.

ChiChiRoma responds:

Lol, don't think I'll make it that far. xD
Thanks alot, you have alot of good points. Most definately bear that in mind. I'll give higher frame rates a shot. :)

[MysticShinHanKu]

great job

needs some sound and color, but it was amazing and smooth. Great job, really. I was a little nice because I really liked the look of it, and you show promise. I 5'd it.

I'd love to voice act for one of your flashes (demo on my userpage) I hope to see some great submissions from you in the future! Good luck.

ChiChiRoma responds:

Thanks, next one should have both someday. xD

You have some great stuff! :)

[SulferDragon]

Actually...

This isn't bad at all for your first flash. Heck, it's better then almost any "first flashes" I've seen. It's not just random stickmen with violence, and it's longer than 5 seconds. It's a little hard to tell what's going on without any sound or text, but I think I kind of understood... maybe...? The animation is decent, and the drawings aren't terrible. The whole flash could use more body, but for your very first attempt, it's actually pretty cool.

ChiChiRoma responds:

There wasn't any story, if nothing at all; I was just adding things one after another. Originally it was supposed to be a dog wagging its tail. Then I kinda overdid it. :D
Thanks alot. :)

[BurningBlades]

Hm...

This isn't bad, especially for a first flash.
Although, some audio might help next time.

Hehe, what do I know, i have the artistic sense of a mutated peanut :P

ChiChiRoma responds:

even mutated peanuts have good points. :P
Thanks, I'll be keeping that in mind. :)