I think anyone who puts this much effort...
deserves a ten. It was fun and enjoyable, and was a nice change from regular animation. You did something very uncommon (from what I've seen on Newgrounds), and for that you have my respect.
Thing to work on: Nothing, it was great, but if you really want something to work on, then maybe different lighting would be good.
Even though it was short, I would nominate this for an Oscar. Very creative, and I hope I see more of your work in the future. :)